.... Today, the technology such as Television and radio became part of our life, these two are similar in usual, but there are a variety of differences. First, television uses more Sensory than radio, which is more effective on the recipients. Moreover, the number of the people how watching the television in all age such as kids, adult, and senior is bigger than those people how listen to the radio. On the other hand, people can carry a small advice and listen to the radio everywhere and that not the same in watching television. Finally, both of the television and radio have many differences that is completed each other and give choices for people still up date in even though they are stay home or in the car or everywhere.
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I think that you could try and develop this paragraph into an essay, as there are other ideas that you can discuss about the similarities and differences between these two media. Always remember that you need to edit and proofread each piece of writing carefully. Consider these for example:
-Why have you started your paragraph with 4 dots?
- look at the last sentence and try to see if you can correctit. Is this your conclusing sentence?
- can you think of any more similarities and differences?
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