The beautiful city Vancouver faces a big challenge with homelessness. It’ is one of the biggest problems in Vancouver. The Homeless spread all over the city especially in the center of the city.Due to CTV Channel the population of homeless in Vancouver is growing, it may triple by 2010; however, the problem is not static which need finding short-term solution to stop the grown and long-term solution to finish it.
The second cause to solve the problem immediately is the 2010 Olympics. There will be 2.3 million visitors, who come to visit Vancouver and other cities, and the expected impression when they see the huge number of homelessness will be negative.
Last thing about the cause of challenge is the crimes, it’s incontestable that where is poor there is crime. People can control themselves so long as the find the minimum thing help them to live but if the can’t find it, and they feel them live in dangerous, they lost the control and do any thing to save it, which could be dangerous to others people.
In short, Vancouver needs speedily act to solve homelessness as fast as it can to still the beautiful city that we know it.
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2 comments:
Thamir: I agree that this is a terrible problem that we have in Vancouver, and i agree that solutions need to be found as soon as possible.
Be careful not to mix up 'Due to' and "According to", and always remember that an important part of writing is the last part - when you edit and proofread your work carefully!
Hi Thamer,
Homeless is a pretty big problem to each advanced developed cities. From your journal, I have learned lots of expressions. Maybe you can use some long and complex sentences.
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